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#1 Shark

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Posted 27 December 2010 - 02:14 AM

(new link, deleted old one, march 25th) http://soundcloud.co...btract-acoustic

Lyrics are all their, this is a demo. Wrote over a week or so, recorded in an hour or two.

Tell me what you think about it please, this is the first song I've finished really that i like in like months.

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Posted 28 December 2010 - 10:13 PM

to be perfectly honest I think you should speed it up, and make the guitar less screachy. If those two things were different I would think it was a pretty good song.
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Posted 29 December 2010 - 08:33 PM

Not bad dude. Sorta reminds me of Tool's older stuff.

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Posted 03 January 2011 - 12:00 PM

I would get rid of the electric guitar entirely and add some percussion. It really adds a world of difference - I could make a synthesized beat that you could put behind it just to show you. If I get around to that... :|

How do I download it lol

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Posted 04 January 2011 - 07:21 PM

lrn2audacity

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Posted 04 January 2011 - 10:28 PM

This said:

How do I download it lol
Is that a reply to this?

That said:

lrn2audacity

If so, how does one do this?

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Posted 05 January 2011 - 02:58 AM

are you saying to record the song coming out of the speakers?

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Posted 06 January 2011 - 08:06 PM

View PostMaximum-Can, on 05 January 2011 - 02:58 AM, said:

are you saying to record the song coming out of the speakers?


Yeah. If you can't rip it from the site, just use Audacity to record the streaming sound. Works great.

#9 Shark

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Posted 25 March 2011 - 09:17 AM

Boo your song sucks!

I did an acoustic version, which is kinda the same but a little different, new song coming today hopefully too.

http://soundcloud.co...btract-acoustic

Blog: http://dopamineflood...wag.tumblr.com/

See I'm in love with everyone,
Every sweetheart on the scene,
Each set of cheekbones that'll flare past me,
I'm not saying that it's right,
And I'm not saying it's a life,
I'm just saying it's where I'm at tonight.

And I could be with anyone.


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Posted 25 March 2011 - 02:00 PM

View PostMezulu, on 06 January 2011 - 08:06 PM, said:

Yeah. If you can't rip it from the site, just use Audacity to record the streaming sound. Works great.
I can't figure out how to get good quality sound this way though. The sound comes out sounding like a mono source.

View Postthc, on 25 March 2011 - 09:17 AM, said:

Boo your song sucks!

I did an acoustic version, which is kinda the same but a little different, new song coming today hopefully too.

http://soundcloud.co...btract-acoustic
The acoustic sound is pleasant except I think it would sound better if there was no guitar pick sound. Also would be great if you could record it in stereo. (Y)

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#11 Shark

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Posted 25 March 2011 - 03:35 PM

Another new song! http://soundcloud.co...en-tea-acoustic

And yeah only being able to use a rockband microphone and garage band has it's drawbacks, but i will record these professionally eventually.

Blog: http://dopamineflood...wag.tumblr.com/

See I'm in love with everyone,
Every sweetheart on the scene,
Each set of cheekbones that'll flare past me,
I'm not saying that it's right,
And I'm not saying it's a life,
I'm just saying it's where I'm at tonight.

And I could be with anyone.






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